A Metamorphoasis Comments

ONElia AVElar! Beautiful poem.

Wow...I love the way you write!

short verses that create ripples in the lake of thoughts - striking very deep chords.10/10 and my vote!

Yes, its a metamorphosis, a complete change in her appearance and character. The magic transformation of a woman.

Refreshing- always above our simple human nature and lots - air- faith - desire - a new kingdom

beyond red lips her teeth... an oasis of ONE pAVEment... you plaster, dates for many... ... Annie get your gun... the firing range is hot with this one... always with the aroha, Deana

The tunes of melancholy come through for me. An exceptional poem and I agree there is a talent here that can say so much in so few words and with the loudly spoken gesture of such unfettered individuality. H

Ammmmmmazing! truely poetic lingu! 10+

Icredibly beautiful poem...loved it the minute I saw it. The repetitions are masterly and one just gets tangled up in the emotions hinted at that yet remains mysterious. I have just come across the word MIDAREOGAMI...which is Japanese for tangled hair and both the phrase and your poem have morphed into my mind as two things of beauty. I remain tangled in your feelings and words. love Dónall Dónall

One, Yes, this poem is multi-layered. I find a metamorphOasis. You seem to have moved to a new poetic plane. Any way, it is magical. CP

As always, a beautiful multilayered picture, this time of passionate sadness. Your imagery, taken from the most passionate religion that I know of, is very strong and you achieve so much in so few words. Love, Jan x

'Longing' is a multiform word, these lines are worthy of 'Metamorphoses' by Horace.

i see a pathetic picture in this metamorphosis...

Beautiful depiction, tender words expressed perfectly. HG: -) xx