A Messed Up Poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Just Read It And U Will C.......... Read It Up And Down And Compare They R One Of The Same....... Comments

very nice poem kinda reminds me of my friend tho... alot.. but i like it just the same

like it! ! its neat. kinda emo but i like it lol.

I loved both and dont even think you had the need to print the second any one who gets it would just read it from bottom to top, what it said to me was a way of showing a self harmers confusion and mixed emotions Loved it Kev

The real poem i can relate to, kinda, and a good write it is to, The 1st bit, is like yoda trying to do poetry, (lol) sorry, couldnt help myself. Agree with 'Black shadow' 1st is a bit strange,2nd is cool, Well done.

I hated the first poem, it really confused me, but the second is deep orginezed with a strong idea, keep it up

Let's put the 'fun' back in funeral.