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for me, i see a cause-and-result message which everyone has to learn...... good work Mr. Brown

Hi Dan, It's so beautiful. I feel that I can almost taste the pain. It's so deep and moving, a wonderful piece of poetry. Well done. Mary

i luv this poem its like i can feel the pian in this poem its really good

how come your poems seem to be written about my feelings? ? i've never read a poem that sums them up so well. its so beautiful.xxx

Hi dan, i like this one.. brings back certain memories......x