A Message To Us. Comments

'Not one wild-living soul Acts without instinct's goal To make it's life whole. Not governed by destructive mood'...these four lines serve the key lines of the poem. Only a man closer to heart can write such beautiful verses...10

This flowing prose and its reflection echo the way I see the world myself. Your words star at the nature lovers’ singing hearts… it affirms your sensitivity as a poet to your surroundings. Another one of your great poems Fay!

live the present excitements, the present plesantaries of life...good write, Fay...good message...10

Fay, a joy to read. Straight from the hand of a gentle soul.10/10 Ian

Fay, this was such a wonderful read that i read. it brightened my dad indeed! thank you Adam

Fay, this is for those who do not see the beauty of this world of ours. I really enjoyed the flow this is a lovely write. Bob

Hi Fay. This one flows so well. you just drift along with it while looking at what surrounds you in nature. what a gift for us all. Thankyou **10** Regards Dave T.

The visible world that sings its harmonious song in a silent mood looks for ears that can grasp the soul of its pantomime. The birds, carrying a seal on their wings show them to us, but where they’ll find a watchful beholder! Only our poet, speaking the language that they speak, understands its echoing music.

Another wonderful nature poem from our pen. Your imagery is a delight to read, and your rhyming is very well produced. love and hugs Ernestine XXX

great! the ability to convey hope and beauty about a seemingly vanity pursuit we call life....i can't believe i just read five of your poems at a go, very captivating.

very beautiful, and optimistic. Reminds me of the things in nature that really matter

This one is a powerful write we need to respect nature's as well as each others rights

Tall order Fay, sadly cant see it, can hope though 10 regards Tom

This is very good. It's time that man realised that he is part of nature, and lived within her bounds. An excellent poem. Tango.