Monday, March 13, 2023

A Message -To The Prisoners Of Upbringing Comments

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Break the eggshells around you
Shatter the chain of your memorised series
Let free your mind to meet your thoughts
The emptiness around you is killing
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M. Asim Nehal
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Bharati Nayak 20 April 2023

A very inspiring poem.Often we fall victim to preconceived notions and beliefs of the surroundings in which we are brought up.It takes a lot of courage to undo them and walk with new belief.

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The realisation that what we perceived as our prison is just and eggshell and that the shackles are just our memories comes late. But when discern this fact, nothing remains. We are free to soar in the skies like butterflies, on our wings of our dreams.. great poem, Azim. Enjoyed

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 March 2023

Love it Asim

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Richard Wlodarski 14 March 2023

2) The other, refusing to let the negative environment shape his mind, he becomes a success. Hard to believe how many successful male and female celebrities had upbringing in such harsh environments!

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Richard Wlodarski 14 March 2023

Very inspirational, Dr Nehal! I've always found it fascinating how two people from the same environment can turn out so different. One, like so many others from a negative environment, turns out a failure.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 13 March 2023

Liked much.

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Suzon Albert 13 March 2023

Fantastic messgaein two line: Rescue your soul from the eye of evil. and do not fall victim to your own upbringing

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 13 March 2023

Inspiring poem to leave trhe past and move forward without carrying the unnecessary baggages.

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M. Asim Nehal

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