Sunday, September 9, 2018

A Message To Teen Aged Students Comments

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I know, I know, the night after a romantic evening!
I listened to the call of aurora while she talked with me
Listened to the music of sea winds when she walked with me
I am glad, she fulfilled her promise of a fantastic evening.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mahtab Bangalee 12 September 2018

ow nicely penned on romantic sense - ///// but Teen comes to buy flower for making love with sweet sense of life. Self coyness mind makes all blush for slight mat. (Ninette)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

An absolute message to the teen aged students has been astutely and touchingly delineated. The last Stanza is.much impressive and didactic. Thank u dear Jawad sir.

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Bharati Nayak 12 September 2018

Romance and exams of life superbly juxtaposed. A wonderful poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 September 2018

I have composed many poems for the teens they think I am mad go ahead and don't blink when the girl has been inked the guys flunk gals seemingly get sunk then they come running to me see what he's done I said I am blind now then you were when I warned you All want to learn that a flame can burn only when their finger is placed in the candle flame Since then I have stopped warning teens they say oldy go we know

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 September 2018

A beautiful poem with a unique theme and meaningful message. A vivid and lovely portrayal of a romance usually experienced by teen aged strudents. Liked the last stanza, it conveys a great advice. Superbly penned.10+++

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Kelly Kurt 09 September 2018

I know a number of teenaged students. Advice is often politely received, but experience is more often heeded.

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