Tuesday, December 23, 2008

A Message To Share Comments

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Here is a message I want to share with you
A message I hope you will like
To all who do read, this is the first
I have shared on this site to all of you
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Marama Kelly
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Shekhar Joshi 04 August 2009

beautiful write..........nice message to share......... liked it.... ;)

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Sameer Ahmed 21 January 2009

Your poem reflects the goodheartedness of oneself with a message that one should express in words whatever comes to the mind without any hesitation. One should outpour the feelings and emotions without considering oneself non-creative or an incompitent because putting your thoughts in words frequently makes you percieve things from different angles and your vision broadens with the passage of time and diversity knocks your door with loads of new visions. So keep writing....10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Js Black 06 January 2009

Best to be the poet you are and not the one others want you to be. A great philosophy you have there, and I look forward to more of your work...Jeff.

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Kelvin Karani 06 January 2009

A great piece there Kelly Rhime, style and what have you can come later if they will but here is what is true content has primacy over form just write as musch as you can andsay hi to enevery one at home I'm watching this space to be always the first to know what has come from you after the great introductory one.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 January 2009

simply awonderful introductory message of goodwill and grace, that inspires me by ur poetic muse unequalled, may God lead u with His kindly light as you trudge though this jouerney of poetics yet with glory and fame, i do adore and admire humble flow from a true soul.....10+++++, thanks for sharing

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Shayenne Mitchell 28 December 2008

when i read this, it made me envious of you. your obviously very talented, and yet you do'nt care what others think, but at the same time you do. and i hope this does't sound crazy, but when i was reading that poem, it sounded like you were so free, just like a bird flying in the sky. it's very beautiful!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 27 December 2008

This poem reflects how simple and humble you are. words are rhythmic

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Aiswarya. T.anish 27 December 2008

Wonderful introduction. Penned beautifully how we would expect people to co-operate with us when we are new to someone or something, how we can l learn from others, how we can help each other and improve ourselves, the talent within us. This poem is from the heart, from innocence. Words fail for the humbleness in this poem. A million Exellent's won't work. This poem is beautiful. Keep writing.....

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Ency Bearis 26 December 2008

A very nice introduction and message from a humble person..true to say no one is perfect and thats why we need an input from others, in that way you can improve if something is missing or need to be reconstructed..it is better of two heads than one as we say... welcome and Good Luck..

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Michael Gale 25 December 2008

True and from the heart. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 December 2008

A message very well shared. Poetry has no limitations. Nice start. Welcome on board!

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Sarah Sisson 23 December 2008

what a sweet introduction...welcome to the site!

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