A Message To My New-Found Friend, Continued... Comments

This is an impressive work. For it's message and it's presentation. Kudos

Well whoever inspired this, must be quite majestic, to say the least. I love the continuing emphasis on the fact the person this is addressed to has never been seen, up close, and personal; so this is only really half the story; and yet the writer is so enchanted with the story; that it seems he could be fully satisfied by only half of the whole, however wonderful it might or might not turn out to be. The language is both lush and restrained by turn; and remains always intensely courteous and respectful. For some reason it reminds of those gorgeous sonnets of old; which swell with such passion and only by use of a few constrained words; as if the use of a magic spell gave them all of their true power and influence.

how did you manage to write something i know a lot of poeple here think they could've written....be careful of objects falling!

for someone not to hear you is a travesty your words enlighten you are wise and this analysis is based on your verse your incredible rhythm your ability to express what we all feel in a way we haven't heard before i definitely think that 'someone else' is really you