Sunday, August 28, 2016

A Message To My Daughter Comments

Rating: 4.9

My daughter writes,
'Be in this world as a stranger
or as a traveler
passing along his way.'
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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2016

A wonderful poem with a beautiful message to daughter. Yes, this world is beautiful only if we live in it. Nature is bountiful to fill our heart with love. I liked the way you wrote the poem. Loved reading it.

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Hazel Durham 30 August 2016

Love is the answer to all the problems of the world and to see the beauty in simple everyday life is to live and breathe in the wonder that is life. To feel the love of family and friends and to appreciate it, to see sadness in a stranger's eyes and to care, to feel the joy of falling in love, to cherish our children, to be open to different religions and cultures is just like a flower opening up to the sun we will bloom too! An outstanding write and a beautiful gift to your daughter!

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Nosheen Irfan 29 August 2016

A beautiful message from you. Yes, we should try to become a part of this lovely universe. Great thoughts expressed in an enchanting manner. Thanks.10

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Abduhoo Salamath 28 August 2016

excellent message (advice) ...well done sir..and Thanks for sharing...

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Kelly Kurt 28 August 2016

It is easy to become disenfranchised with the world as it exists. Inequality, violence, selfishness, hatred, greed, war and oppression are rife. All the more reason to take the woefully short time we have to live, and live it as you described.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2016

Best message nicely presented. Thanks for sharing.....10

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Khalida Bano Ali 28 August 2016

A beautiful message, development of human civilization and progress stops when one becomes a pessimist.

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