Wednesday, September 17, 2008

A Message From The Heart Comments

Rating: 4.3

Your heart throbs like giving you a message;
Take care of Me (your heart)
and I'll take care of you.
Do not abuse Me (your heart) or I'll have to avenge Me
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Marijo Pinero
COMMENTS
Edgar Andrade Baguio 22 September 2008

The persona in this poem is timid about wine, but not as something for her heart. I like the two last lines. You get 10 then! Nice one.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 September 2008

a scarlet wish from a true heart by the prayer passion aspires fror the gleams of moon ness...............wounderfully wrought by the imagery, heart yet needs thrum, yet luscious green across the gentle breath of togetherness,10+, thanks for sharing

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Tanya Stanford 17 September 2008

Very sincere and sweet. Lovely little composition.

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