Wednesday, June 7, 2017

A Message Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rays have brought your message
Piercing through my closed window
I can read a golden hued line
'I'll be yours, all my life'
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Nikhat Bano
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Khairul Ahsan 02 February 2018

Wonderfully crafted poem with utmost economy of words.

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Indira Renganathan 22 June 2017

Simple and catchy indeed....thanks for sharing

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 June 2017

Simply superb, imagery and style of expression. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2017

Reading a golden hued line is amazing through vision of mind uniting with light of wisdom that comes up to us. Piercing through window this Divine light rays come as grace of God. We feel these rays with due love. Love for God is eternal and love of God is eternal. An excellent poem is very well penned.10.....Congratulations!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 16 June 2017

Undefeatable, undeniable and unchallenged power of love. It can penetrate any enclosure. Wonderfully crafted poem. Congrats for gaining the well deserved acknowledgement. Thanks for sharing. X

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Very beautiful and spiritual..Welcome to PoemHunter..

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 June 2017

All my life! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 16 June 2017

Beautiful line..presence of true love is felt everywhere, even in a closed room..here sun is compared as the lover and rays reaching through her window is the message of promise. Congrats

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Jasbir Chatterjee 16 June 2017

very nice poem. I heard about you somewhere, but I can't remember where. Perhaps on Facebook. Congrats on being poet of the day!

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Jasbir Chatterjee 16 June 2017

very nice poem. I heard about you somewhere, but I can't remember where. Perhaps on Facebook. Congrats on beibg poet of thr dsy!

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Rajnish Manga 16 June 2017

Congrats for this coveted selection of your very first composition on this Forum as 'Poem Of The Day'. Rare distinction. Thanks.

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Rajnish Manga 16 June 2017

Welcome to this august Forum, Dr. Nikhat Bano, along with an outstanding poem. The message is as soft and delicate as the beatings of a lover's heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Tom Allport 16 June 2017

a wonderful poem of future commitment to the love of another? .................beautifully written

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Richard Wlodarski 16 June 2017

Through rays of sun A heart of gold Congratulations on Poem Of The Day. Most deserved.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 June 2017

Such a lovely poem..... I rate it 10++++++ You may visit my BECAUSE I LOVE HER, HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, and EACH PASSING DAY...Thanks....

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Christina Simmons 16 June 2017

This written piece is so very positive: makes one feel very hopeful, in deed. Thank you, for coming up with such an inspiring poem. CONGRATULATION! ! !

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Bharati Nayak 16 June 2017

Love's message written on sunlight- -So vast and so strong an emotion compressed in such few words- -Thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.

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William Baez 16 June 2017

beautiful and simple, a nice economy of words

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Chinedu Dike 15 June 2017

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Passionate piece of poetry elegantly encapsulated from the heart with conviction. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing Nikhat.

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Nikhat Bano 07 June 2017

these are four lines about a deep, passionate love of a person, who happens to see his/her lover even in the sun rays.

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