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Nice one..10 So wish honestly And pray dearly For comfortable stay Wherever he is or stays away

Verily, a poem that expresses emotions in their positive and negative attributes

i was astonished by your use of words conveying all that you want............. first part was very positive and lots of aspirations, wishes, love........ but in the second part..... sad emotions, sense of loss, love and life faced with problems......regret, despair, vacuum, vapidness, twist and turns...... i really enjoyed reading our poem....... that is life..... a real picture of life that we all go through........ thank you very much for this great poem. tony

This message is for your love......in between your golden past and despair-ridden present perhaps you are searching yourself......your emotions have been nicely reflected in your verses...

itches heart throbs mind blooms withers soul absconded- thanks for sharing