Monday, November 24, 2008

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Rating: 2.7

Nothing has happened
I have not been abused
Yet somehow, deep inside
I feel hurt and used
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Amy
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Pilar Killen 30 January 2009

Brill writer, love this poem so much, ive felt just like that once

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B3@utiful Dis@st3r 14 January 2009

this is deep great poem! ! ur a great writer

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Joey Rodriguez 05 December 2008

This is such a deep poem, for starting to write a couple of months ago you have great talent. Keep it up.

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Kite Remedy 04 December 2008

That's a great poem.. Betrayal, love, traumatic state after someone lied to you.. Nice write..

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Egi David Perdana 30 November 2008

something I believe this very make me touch

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Hi Amy! So young and so talented! A sad and lovely poem. Well done. I would appreciate if you read and comment my first published poem.

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Aijaz Asif 25 November 2008

you put all your feelings in the pen and wrote a painful master piece with very good use of rhymes, i liked it thanks 10 for this couragous write rgds asif

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Bassam Harby 24 November 2008

awesome

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James Foulk 24 November 2008

Amy this was a very warm and gentle piece of poetry. thank you for reading my heart and for your kind comment.

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Taylor Clayton 24 November 2008

wow this is good, i love it. good job.

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