Wednesday, February 3, 2010

A Merry Widow Comments

Rating: 2.7

From a pretty lace bed,
in the chamber
of a cosy widow, where old ornaments
dusted to death by the feathers of ostrich,
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Ian Bowen
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... Dog God 8hate 05 February 2010

... & 'She comes out of the bathroom, and turns his photo... to 'about turn' and face the lily patterned wall.' Maybe: She comes out of the bathroom and turns his photo... 'about face' to view a lily patterned wall. A Merry Ian in his lily patterned view.... .

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Kee Thampi 05 February 2010

dusted to death by the feathers of ostrich, sit on polished shelves; where a soldier in khaki, glares at me from behind glass. nice poem in words makes it full

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