A Merry Melody Comments

the poem is just right in size!

this piece is a work of a great poet and a fine musician...poem with a song is written as one, , , so nice...maybe the english one is the translation of this other language you use..thanks for this dedication..thanks a lot..naizz

i'd like to hear this melody u've so beautifully crafted with words. nice to go into another language...clueless as to what it means but it sounds pretty. -Every rose starts out as an ash-Ashes 2 Roses :)

Good write! ................... 10

A merry melody indeed. I enjoyed the poem and the melody shaped by the solfege syllables is most attractive. I will ask a cellist to play it in your honor.

Mesmering musical notes always captures the spirit and brings emotions on a wirlwind dance.Lovely.

Awesome! You're so good... and I love the beautiful images and melodious verse. Keep it up! 10++++

Who can't picture a giant choir in flowing gowns belting this out in vast harmony? Wonderous creation here, Ahmad, with flowing verse, playful rhymes and gilded memories. Warm regards, John.

A truly melodious poem Ahmad....10 from me

i like the way words flow in this poem, i enjoye reading it

I should be ashamed, that I am part German-But alas-Ye lost me there, Kind Sir. As for the rest o' th' poem-Excellent! God bless us all-MJG.

O.K.. you really caught me off guard, German? yea, I can respect that all day eveyday......10

Ahmad, This simply delightful. Music certainly cleanses our souls from he dust of everyday life. Wonderful imagery. I think I will dance the day away...... top marks from me.

A musical poem.. Indeed a merry melody

The spirit of the moment is clearly conveyed. The poem has met its purpose.

i liked it nice write :)

I understood the part in english. It justifies the fine title. Good one

Musical, light, airy..pleasant to read.

I love the sentiment (what I understood) and the flow of this piece. The title set the mood perfectly.

Good write! I enjoy reading it!