Friday, May 18, 2012

A Merry Dance Comments

Rating: 4.5

I never once suspected
On the day we said 'I do'
That you might be really saying
'I'll do what I want to do! '
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Dawn Ferrett
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John Brown 29 September 2012

I could sense the twist coming, but didn't expect it quite so soon. I enjoyed this one all the same.

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Ruth Walters 30 August 2012

Well he'll know now if he read this poem: o)))))

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Captain Cur 19 May 2012

Rumba, what a dancing little poem. En-tango-ed in the clues we seive when we believe we are deceived.

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Dawn Ferrett

Dawn Ferrett

Portsmouth, Hampshire
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