Thursday, December 6, 2007

A 'Merry' Christmas Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

Green swirls consume my soul.
Your so much better than me.
You are the fachist's best freind,
I am human. I hate it.
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Danny, James Archer
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Khalid Saleh 10 December 2007

I like it, the loss of the breaking up of rhythm gives a sense that the persona is drunk, i like it

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