Sunday, December 1, 2013

A Mermaid's Tale Of Concrete's World Comments

Rating: 3.5

A Mermaid's Tale of Concrete's World

I am watching the sea from this concrete's world;
Turquoise blue happy waves;
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Morose Mermaid
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Adeeb Alfateh 26 June 2019

Am I being punished by the Lord of Sea? Is it for imprisoning you in this concrete world? good; impressive expression good 10+++++++++++++

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Kanav Justa 02 December 2013

.. really liked the last stanja a lot.... keep up ...

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Khairul Ahsan 02 December 2013

This is a nice tribute to a sea. Sea waves have been metaphorically compared to different colors and dimensions. 'Let me compliment you with my untouched beauty... ' This is a very warm compliment!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 02 December 2013

Wow fantasy imaginations poem. Written superbly. I lov watchin waves too. Do read my latest poem too.

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Poet's Fan 02 December 2013

seems the mermaid is now feeling like a fish out of water........on a concrete jungle......

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Lucifera Santez 02 December 2013

wow, unique and imaginative. loved it. please read some of my poems and comment. :)

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