A Mermaid's Tale of Concrete's World
I am watching the sea from this concrete's world;
Turquoise blue happy waves;
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This is a nice tribute to a sea. Sea waves have been metaphorically compared to different colors and dimensions. 'Let me compliment you with my untouched beauty... ' This is a very warm compliment!
Wow fantasy imaginations poem. Written superbly. I lov watchin waves too. Do read my latest poem too.
seems the mermaid is now feeling like a fish out of water........on a concrete jungle......
wow, unique and imaginative. loved it. please read some of my poems and comment. :)
Am I being punished by the Lord of Sea? Is it for imprisoning you in this concrete world? good; impressive expression good 10+++++++++++++