***a Mermaid's Sleep Which Used To Escape In A Waiting Shape Comments

A Mermaid's SleeP WhicH used to EscapE In A WaitinG ShapE is a poem lush with lovely lines all through especially ' last night where the soul's sorrow was a mate, / last night where she found one start, / an end of a falling tear, or perhaps a newborn of a pain.. / last night where a start left a trace of rain in her cloudy eyes...calling he who knows how to dive in oceans of her hidden emotions, who invade the soul....'

oceanic words! ! ! lovely! ! !

nyc poem! ! .........................................

longful and lonely, well written, good write tamara

Enjoy the freshness of your phrasing and the images you use to express your ideas and feelings.

thx for the invitation, u were right, i enjoyed ur poem

A unique topic expressed in an interesting and heartfelt manner...thank you for recommending

all I can say is wow! ! ! ! 10+++ expressed feelings very well, because they are well understood and felt also. thanks for sharing

An interesting piece that will require another reading or two before I can respond in depth, will come again soon.... Best wishes, Rhumour

It is a really touching. I heard the mermaid's story when i was a child. But your poem so nicely conveys the sadness and the solitude of the mermaid. After reading your peom, I just felt if i were the sailor, then would have stopped and brought her along with me on the ship back to the city.

Well done.: O Its very nicely put together.

while waiting for little hope... ....for a healer to eradicate the killer of the souls..to knot that broken rope. the seeker seek an art of reading a heart, ....upon arrival and ready to depart agan.. it is human psysological poem.. lovley write...10 read mine... miss i mis u, , butterflies around and anywhere

nice poem beutiful what more could i say

Beautiful just beautiful ty for sharing that again just beautiful.

her sleep which used to escape in a waiting shape, while waiting for little hope... ....for a healer to eradicate the killer of the souls..to knot that broken rope. Words pierce the heart and soul... Well thought and lovely narration... Well done...

an artist in listening, singing, reading others' art, i love this expression, very creative poem. thanks for share

nice narrative indeed... nice story ma'am// well crafted! ! ! liked it very much! ! ! thanks for this one10++ with love shan

it is a wonderfull poem to read, you have sketched details of you eyes watching the sea sight..........amazing write with hight of skills

last night where a start left a trace of rain in her cloudy eyes... calling he who knows how to dive in oceans of her hidden emotions, who invade the soul.. .love intense dissipates night from dark ling glance sailor yet not fugitive to blaze fame of flames in trance cloudy eyes shelter in lap of slumber deep as knows how to break the wall rocking glows, .......excellent exposition of love in quest, hide opens up strengthen rope reverberation, yet a luscious glow by passion, ingenious write yet of unique genre,10++++, thanks for sharing

very very very excellent Hanaring.Allah protect you from Hasedeen.