Witless heart wants me away to flee,
In rain to turn and fall on thee;
Harm and sadness never to cause,
Nor to freeze the warmth of an applause;
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In storming dashing metaphors the visualised feelings and senses paint poeticaly the climate of the loving anxious soul.Real poetical the terms of the composition in the grace of a true sublime ethos.
Thank you, sir, for your wonderful words! ! ! I am very happy that you liked my effort! ! ! Thank you! ! !
And secretly thy lips to kiss. Love can sometimes be so intense, Turns from rain to storm without sense; You end up saying my love is pure. .. loved all these lines … You seem to understand what love is in your own words. To be with whom i cannot be……….? ? ? ? Loved your poem very much and read and read it. Than k you dear poetess. tony
Thank you so much Dr Tony for your kind words about my poem! Very happy you enjoyed it! !