Monday, June 27, 2016

A Mere Drop Of Rain... Comments

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Witless heart wants me away to flee,
In rain to turn and fall on thee;
Harm and sadness never to cause,
Nor to freeze the warmth of an applause;
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Aphrodite Anastasia Menegaki
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 May 2017

And secretly thy lips to kiss. Love can sometimes be so intense, Turns from rain to storm without sense; You end up saying my love is pure. .. loved all these lines … You seem to understand what love is in your own words. To be with whom i cannot be……….? ? ? ? Loved your poem very much and read and read it. Than k you dear poetess. tony

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Thank you so much Dr Tony for your kind words about my poem! Very happy you enjoyed it! !

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Dimitrios Galanis 31 July 2016

In storming dashing metaphors the visualised feelings and senses paint poeticaly the climate of the loving anxious soul.Real poetical the terms of the composition in the grace of a true sublime ethos.

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Thank you, sir, for your wonderful words! ! ! I am very happy that you liked my effort! ! ! Thank you! ! !

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