Sunday, May 18, 2008

A Mercy Bow Comments

Rating: 4.5

Beauty in the Sky
Seven colors well blended
Mercy after rain.
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Loyd C Taylor Sr
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* Sunprincess * 13 May 2014

............rainbows are so beautiful.... and so fantastic....enjoyed..

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Jake Anthony Tadla 12 November 2008

a very nice haiku. brief and precise. feels like I want to swim in the rain the very next time it falls.

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Reshma Ramesh 06 October 2008

simple and sweet............

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David Desantis 27 May 2008

LC, This is so simple...but the words are strewn together very beautifuly. 'Mercy after rain' is a great image. I like the nature metaphors, im big on that too

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Marsha Surles 25 May 2008

This is a wonderfully expressed haiku, so much truth, thanks for sharing

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