A Merciless Jill Comments

a very stirring piece of poetry. the angel of good killed the angel of bad.

seems like the two angels one for bad and one for the good...................we usually get enticed by the wrong me....but if we r lucky the good one saves us in time..................good thoughtful poem. don't force ur rhyme all the time..try slanting it....

wow... this poem really struck me... mind blowing words and absolutely amazing poem...infact you really created an awesome twist in the poem... truly loved it. I was holding my breathe while I was reading the last three paragraphs... +++10. keep up the good work! ! ! ! :)

Good Lord Sire! A sudden twist at the end, that got me there. Just purely and exquisitely brilliant and I mean BRILLIANT!

Narration of this poem was well composed and a reader should be able to come to the conclusion of poet's idea/story. Excellent.

Wow, you tell such an intense story. This is a fantasic write you words just capture the reader.

awesome indeed...................