Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Friday, April 27, 2012

A Merciless Curse Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now the mirror inside me misses you so much
It tends to break into pieces without a touch!
Slowly the wound inside me becomes worse
So my life seems like a merciless curse!
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Anita Sehgal 28 May 2012

Read your poems. liked this one specially ... Touching poem

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Tiana Webb 03 May 2012

Sad poem, very sad. So much emotion and feelings poured into a poem. You captured the pain from the memories of the things and people we have missed and lost. I like it very much.

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Unwritten Soul 27 April 2012

Like a storm it damaging heart, in rainy tears...cloudy eyes...the strong wind in your write really feel and touch outside....i can see that and it really pain to only sense a memory that we missed and lost. Nice touch Asif_Unwritten Soul

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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