Thursday, May 15, 2008

A Memory Shall Flow Comments

Rating: 4.0

Into a melody, a memory shall flow
Guided by an echo, and, ever so slow
O're to the mountains, t'is dancing on a breeze
T'is the echo laughing with the trees.
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M Rene Riel
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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Lovely and beautiful 10++

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Emily Oldham 20 September 2008

it's all lovely, especially the first couplet

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Tanya Stanford 27 August 2008

Memories. Some good some bad but something we all have. Good use of words to emphasive this.

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Chitra - 22 July 2008

nice one, great rhyme there

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M Rene Riel

M Rene Riel

Plattsburgh New York USA
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