A Memory Of Freedom Comments
Voices plagued my head today.
Posing numerable questions about me.
I battled and fought with these thoughts;
But one remained: When was I last free?
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Sean, this mood poem is full of great imagery...your eyes being pried open, and the orange moon. I think it needs 'tightening' a bit. Look for lines which seem a bit extraneous and cut them. I think you will like it better. Leave only the lines that bring you to your theme and visually. You are a true poet! Raynette
Very nice poem! ! So visual! ! I really enjoyed this! Sincerely, Mary
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7/19/2025 3:06:40 AM # 1.0.0
lovely poem sean. keep on trying.