Wednesday, June 6, 2012

A Memory Lives Comments

Rating: 4.7

These memories wander in my head

These tears of mine still lingers
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Godfrey Morris
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Heather Wilkins 05 June 2013

a beautiful write. Memories linger long after they have left.

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Far Lapenna 07 November 2012

Words coming from the lips of a true poet! Fantastic poem

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Laurie Abc 14 August 2012

Words of a true memory, nice poem and thank you for your complement

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Faith Fimano 09 July 2012

You use your words wisely and each word goes in a steady pace, exactly were its needed.The name of your title was exactly what it needed to be.It caught my eye.And seemingly many others have agreed with me this is a great write.

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Virginia Pecho Gely 05 July 2012

Lovely and powerful. I saw the pains and the nostalgy of a lost love; but never forgotten. Merci d'avoir partagé votre genie et votre peine.

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Randy Hogan 27 June 2012

Thank you for the lovely read, pen comes from the heart. ~*~ Randy

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Nontobeko Dlamini 24 June 2012

Emotional coherency incoporated making it flow beautifuly. So vivid and sincere. Thank you for sharing!

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Kaila George 20 June 2012

This is beautiful just beautiful...made me want to laugh and cry all at once, now thats how a poet should write...thanks for your wonderful write, and I hope to see more of your poems.

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Lydia Thacker 20 June 2012

You've incorporated some incredibly beautiful phrases here. The words ring true, and are quite vivid. I would love to hear you, as the author, read it aloud. Blessings and much luck on your poetic journey; you've quite the beginning already, from the work I've seen by you on here.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 June 2012

A very nice piece of work. Keep it up and, let us also learn from you as well. Thank you. E.K.L.

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Farah Ilyas 18 June 2012

really liked this, thank you for messaging me, I really enjoyed this and I hope you continues to write! ....memories always chase us like dreadful ghost...well done

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Louis Rams 17 June 2012

a nice flow of feelings and emotions found

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Constance K Yost 17 June 2012

So nice that you have put those lovely thoughts into beautiful words! Constance Yost

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Darkangel Flyfree 17 June 2012

Wow i really like this one! ! ! All the memories, all the tears just lingers within, not going away. A beautiful write! ! !

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Clarence Prince 14 June 2012

A nice job, Godfrey!

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Savita Tyagi 11 June 2012

Marvelous poem. Loved the flow and thoughts. Wonderful! Enjoyed reading so much.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 11 June 2012

you have tried to knock the heads..good try!

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Anita Sehgal 10 June 2012

made great reading..

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this is amazing. i enjoyed this.

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Godfrey Morris

Godfrey Morris

Kingston, Jamaica
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