These memories wander in my head
These tears of mine still lingers
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Words of a true memory, nice poem and thank you for your complement
You use your words wisely and each word goes in a steady pace, exactly were its needed.The name of your title was exactly what it needed to be.It caught my eye.And seemingly many others have agreed with me this is a great write.
Lovely and powerful. I saw the pains and the nostalgy of a lost love; but never forgotten. Merci d'avoir partagé votre genie et votre peine.
Thank you for the lovely read, pen comes from the heart. ~*~ Randy
Emotional coherency incoporated making it flow beautifuly. So vivid and sincere. Thank you for sharing!
This is beautiful just beautiful...made me want to laugh and cry all at once, now thats how a poet should write...thanks for your wonderful write, and I hope to see more of your poems.
You've incorporated some incredibly beautiful phrases here. The words ring true, and are quite vivid. I would love to hear you, as the author, read it aloud. Blessings and much luck on your poetic journey; you've quite the beginning already, from the work I've seen by you on here.
A very nice piece of work. Keep it up and, let us also learn from you as well. Thank you. E.K.L.
really liked this, thank you for messaging me, I really enjoyed this and I hope you continues to write! ....memories always chase us like dreadful ghost...well done
So nice that you have put those lovely thoughts into beautiful words! Constance Yost
Wow i really like this one! ! ! All the memories, all the tears just lingers within, not going away. A beautiful write! ! !
Marvelous poem. Loved the flow and thoughts. Wonderful! Enjoyed reading so much.
a beautiful write. Memories linger long after they have left.