Tuesday, December 24, 2013

A Memory Comments

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There's this teenage girl
Who's living in a cold world
she feels so alone
Nobody cares enough at home
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Kylie Archer
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Cleveland Gibson 12 January 2014

A very sad poem about self harm Rework this poem taking care with punctuation because that is what adds drama to any poem.

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