Wednesday, March 4, 2009

A Memorial Comments

Rating: 4.1

Canonised when dead, cannonaded when in life,
Lofty your thoughts that savour of content
But loftier the craftmanship
More congruent in symmetry
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Ms Doubtfire 29 December 2019

I don't have words........but its mind blowingly good Mr. JiGar

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Yehualashet Teshome 31 August 2019

I love your poems especially this one. Thank you

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Anjandev Roy 15 June 2019

Centuries fail to see. Outstanding poem.Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Gerry Legister 18 January 2019

Great work I love each line

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 August 2018

This is really a beautiful poem having touching expression and nice collocation with nice theme. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 July 2018

Dejected and frustrated he leaves the world ashe remained under fire during his life. So what if he is recgnized as a graet man after his martyrdom. Many poets were recognized as a great poet after their death. A touching poem.

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Alam Sayed 08 May 2018

Canonised when dead, cannonaded when in life. The line is very nicely written.

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Lopamudra Mishra 06 May 2017

Thought provoking write, Kudos!

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Gregory Pierre-jerome 07 June 2010

I LIKE THIS POEM A LOT AND PLEASE READ SPIRITUAL WARFARE ON MINE

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Sarah Hough 16 November 2009

I love this poem it is very well written and I like the meaning behind it! 10

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Nalathai Vongjalorn 10 October 2009

Love the poem has so much meanings

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Ravi Sathasivam 30 September 2009

Wonderful poem. Well penned Deep thoughts and concepts. Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Jen Capaldi 06 September 2009

we all hope that we are not here simply to live and die and be forgotten.it's what we do in life that makes us unforgettable that really counts. to many peoples legacies live on for evil or wrong doings than for works of good.very well written. very good thought and intention behind well versed lines. Jen

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Alex Tiberiüs 29 August 2009

very good good poem xD

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Rafique Farooqi 21 August 2009

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Rafique Farooqi 21 August 2009

You see the sculpture and art with deep visions....that is a valueable quality of an artist.

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Rafique Farooqi 21 August 2009

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 07 August 2009

You have 224 comments about this poem! WOW! This one is a sure nice one!

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Irene Clark-hogg 30 July 2009

Perhaps we can only hope that the truth of our lives is engraved on the hearts of those who love us. Irene

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Inday Prising 30 July 2009

'canonised when dead, cannonaded when in life'..the sad reality of life.,

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