light. strikes
a silver hand
outstreached
waving goodbye
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GINA! ! ! Just so you know, I've read all of your poems and I LIKE all of them. (but love quite a few) This one is so sensetive and moving, I printed it out and used it as my graphic design class folder cover, You are deffinetly one of the greatest poets here! I'm gonna put you under 'my friends' (once I figure out how) I'll review all your other masterpices soon! Love, Kyle
This is sensitively done and oh, so tender, thankyou Love duncan X
I liked this poem. it was sweet and tender. Great write! HBH
nice poem you can reminise and connect to your past and your felling that really helps draw the readers in GREAT work!