Sunday, June 13, 2010

A Melody Of Childhood Comments

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A melody I shall impart,
Which dwells within this lonely heart.
And continually courses through my brain,
In brightest sunshine, or in rain.
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Juan Olivarez
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Lynn Glover 02 July 2010

Juan, this is a super write and you have managed to take me back to my childhood, as we followed the bees to their hives in an old tree hole in the woods. The fishing, playing cowboy and Indians was another pleasure of my youth. A brilliant write and thanks for the invitation to read my friend. Good work. Lynn

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