Sunday, October 18, 2015

A Melody For You Comments

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A world winked at me in your smile
In your eyes a star
On your forehead a sun
To light a night out of my many nights!
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Afrooz Jafarinoor
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 October 2015

A melody to revive The time gone by And the sweet pain lived by For anyone any while! Verily, the melody is seen here....10

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 20 October 2015

Thank you dear friend! You really have an ear for music!

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Liza Sudina 18 October 2015

I also dream to compose music, but not based on eros- but dictated from above. Music inspired and even made by God, and dictated to me.

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 19 October 2015

But I had no eros in mind while writing this!

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 October 2015

The time gone by with the muse of love and pain. Nice work.

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 20 October 2015

It's nice of you!

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