A Melody Against Inequity Comments

Hi Anzelyn, What a gorgeous piece! I congratulate you once again for a perfect thought with moving expression. Many greetings and thank God Donnie is out of the presidency. My best wishes, Paul, the American Manhattanite and of Lebanese Heritage.

Hi Anzelyne, Beautiful poem. A heartful response to the inequity and violations around the world. I join the poet in the choruse- Let's rejoice in a common rythm Amelody again st inequity Rhythmically dancing to an equilibrial song'

Preaching water and drinking wine! With the ways of mankind seen everywhere on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Listen to there sound of laughter, in palaces. Drinking and dancing to there slogans, Feasting on silver spoons and gold plates, Others waiting for there remains in dustpins, With stomach aches to there thatched houses, you highlight the contrasts and inequalities in our society. liked it very much. as poets we should raise our voice against all these. thank you dear poetess. thank you. tony

Hi Anzelyne That was an official invitation. I would enjoy that if you could come! Greetings, Paul

Hi Anzelyne, I just composed a piano concerto and finally had a chance to read your wonderful new poem. It has a great philosophy in back at it and points the finger in the right direction. I say Right on and let's jam a blues. Greetings, Paul

wonderful and powerful poem my friend please keep on writing