A Mellow Afternoon Comments

A beautiful picture created here Richard, excellent poem. Best wishes, Andrew

You have allowed the reader to image the peacefulness of this event. You have penned this so delightfully for an excellent read. Thank you for sharing your work with us. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday. Scott

This poem painted a peaceful contented scene. I love the way you tied the word mellow in the text to the title. I think many people would be envious of such a delightful afternoon. Karin Anderson

Dear C.R.: This is is a very personal, and touching poem. Loved it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo

Beautiful evocative afternoon's scene painted with words so masterfully - - - and we were taken along for the pleasure...... thank you Richard........ from Fay.....xx

A beautiful poem heartwarming and serene! Richard you have painted - an eloquent and delightful scene! ! *10*! ! Best regards Friend Thad

Lovely poem very evocative....thank you...Fi

Now this wonderful poem takes me back..It reminds one of simpler times and I love it! ! Becca