A Melancholy Song Comments

A wonderful rendition and having read some of your other poems you seem truly gifted. If you wrote this at the tender age of 14, it is even more amazing. Keep writing and enjoy the accolade of being the poem of the day. Well deserved

All in all a fine poem. One or two phrases maybe stretch the meanings but enjoyable nonetheless. You have a better grasp of rhyme and meter than most on this site. Nicely done.

Beautifully written, a 10.

This is such a haunting poem! God you write well. Who are you Madam? You are a Mystery to us all? Not many woman can create the mood and 'Shrouded Veil' as you have suggested in this ingenious poem with all the right effects of a phantom filled, supernatural but yet saddened heart. If you are as beautiful as your mind you will devastate us all...please reply Brandon