A Melancholy Song Comments

Absolutely a brilliant poem... beautifully composed!

Could it be the loss of love or the life? The pain I hear is the cry of a fear And the wounds have cracked by tears Such a song does settle inside

Wow

The feeling of melancholy can not be easily expressed in a poem as much as this... a beautiful work Asim.. God bless you

The birds are listening and the wind is rustling Silent is the sky, dry leaves gets settled The voice goes high as the song is nearing the end With low pitch the melancholy song shy

Fine flow of words.

Beautiful words you have written, they come straight from your heart.

First of all, A 10 and much much more for this thought-provoking poem, fascinatingly worded. Four most beautiful stanzas and so neatly comprehending Melancholy as The Theme. A loveliest rational poetry about Melancholy as the subject. Brilliantly thought and created. God Bless you and your beloved family always, Asim. Thank you for sharing.

Excellent poem, you wrote it from the depth of your feelings.

No wonder Shelley sang....... our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought! Sad tunes always leave an impact on us! Asim, you have beautifully caught the spirit of melancholy!

Could it be....... Thanks for sharing this poem with us.