A Melancholy Scene Comments

Ah, the shadows of death seemingly loom In the bleeding heart of your poor lonely room There is no joy for life and that sounds so sad But your still breathing and for that we're all so glad

I don't think i've ever read such fantastic dark poem before/seen such a melancholy scene before! ! Excellent penning!

Wow, this poem blew my mind. It's amazing, detail, everything, it's probably one of the best poems I have read on here for sure. Keep it up. And I'm sorry, if all the pain is real, by the way. All mine is that's for sure.

dear poet, Its a wonderful write about death. Pls read my poems too.......

..wonderful write..keep it up

Transfixing. If you dont have poems published other than here you should. Some of the best read on here yet. Thanks... need more

Fantastic write with deep emotions.great poem my friend.

Wonderful, poignant and..'memories come crashing in like waves anguish spilt from crimson carvings' That's beautiful. Another winner.

Terrific imagery, I felt like I was there.Great rhythm too. Starts out like a mystery, then it becomes clearer, and ends with a twist. It has a very dreamy effect, and is haunting, like, your reaching out for help. Very brave of you to do so. You are very open about your melancholy, and your crimson pain. Admitting the problem is half the battle. Hope your writing is a better help for you to release your pain, it is truly a gift you have. Keep penning. Excellent poem.

powerful images again - Felt the detached, disembodied spirit of the piece - Good work SP-G! Best,

Dark, deep feeling... i enjoyed the poem very much and i would like for you to read my poem Grave ~Bella

We all feel trapped sometimes and we see no way out... But the truth is, there are always options... This poem speaks to me, I feel it's brilliance wash over me... Another beautiful write... You are amazing...

As always deep with true emotion. A fantastic write.