A Meeting With The Moon Comments

there are moments, sun, moon, meteors all come in line, same with other planets, as man and nature, love and hate, acceptance, recognition, negligence and disapproval, though all are in paths diverse, but are connected by the Benign Being for nature's law of balance to keep preserved for generations. your romantic instinct of the verse keeps the reader engage into a vast field of interpretation. good work, though poetic conventions and beauty here too remains slightly sheepish at distance. a humble reminder.

there are moments, sun, moon, meteors all come in line, same with other planets, as man and nature, love and hate, acceptance, recognition, negligence and disapproval, though all are in paths diverse, but are connected by the Benign Being for nature's law of balance to keep preserved for generations. your romantic instinct of the verse keeps the reader engage into a vast field of interpretation. good work, though poetic conventions and beauty here too remains slightly sheepish at distance. a humble reminder.

When the sun makes his majestic arrival, the moon disappears! They donot like to see eye to eye! Though at night you had company, with daylight you found yourself alone! A very imaginative write! Yes, welcome to Poem Hunter!

A very sweet poem of moon crafted beautifully......great imagery......Saheb......congratulation to eternal platform of PH.......wish you all the best