Tuesday, September 14, 2021

A Meeting Of The Sea And The Sun - Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crystal white sand beach
Blue clouds roaming in the sky
Emerald green waves
Orange, red and pink sunset
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rob Lamberton 28 December 2022

I love all of the beautiful color in this poem! !

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Soran M. H 15 October 2021

No one can see and distinguish all these colors from parts of nature except a talented, deep thinker and sensitive such as a dear poet Rose

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Soran M. H 15 October 2021

A meeting of true beauty.

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Soran M. H 15 October 2021

Part1/ These bright colours captured by the poet from the beauty of nature are nothing but a rare and precious painting of an accomplished painter,

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Soran M. H 15 October 2021

part2 / but she has painted for us this attractive painting with words instead of a brush, thank you and wait for more from you, the friend of nature there. Excellent 5 stars

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Kostas Lagos 22 September 2021

A poem celebrating beauty of nature. Lovely

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Rebecca Navarre 21 September 2021

Can close my eyes and drift off in to such! .. Amazingly beautiful! ... Such beauty and heart painted into this! .. Definite 5 Stars! .. +++++

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Beauty-carrying colours meet om the evening to fill the hearts with the beauty of colours

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 21 September 2021

I love the beautiful imagery, creating an arresting scene! 5 stars, and to my List.

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Nabakishore Dash 15 September 2021

I wonder at your thinking nice, optimism and really your precise writing skill and acumen.

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Nabakishore Dash 15 September 2021

Very intelligent metaphors and thought.Brilliant

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 September 2021

Emerald waves.....beautiful imagery! Loved it

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 September 2021

you did a great job Bravo! Bravo!

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Sandra Feldman 14 September 2021

Not easy to describe with words, But you captured their beauty together perfectly with the beauty and feeling the subject deserves Thank you for this immaculate portrait.

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Sandra Feldman 14 September 2021

Not easy to describe with words. ut you captured their beauty

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KAVIN CHARALAN 14 September 2021

Everything is beautiful except second line first word blue cloud! If you put grey clouds or cotton white clouds in the blue sky will be nice I think

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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