A Meditation On Emptiness Comments

Incredible perception of meditation and compassion is wonderful really. This poem is excellently penned with wonderful motive...10

MEDITATING not being able to keep hold of conceptions and perceptions enlightenment? compassion? awakening groggy eyed like a new born baby drooling ON EMPTINESS

Nice stream of consciousness. Consider eliminating the punctuation altogether and letting the thoughts flow into each other. That's the sense I get when I read it. Best, Martin

Excellent - you're a master of the line break and enjambment.

The imagery in this piece is beautifully written with precision. Thanks for sharing and the details kept me interested.