A Meaningless Poem Comments

For me, this poem is the worded reflection of the moment when a dream is broken and seems there is no hope left.When one looks at the world and there is no meaning in reality and one feels an emptiness inside, a vacuum in heart and soul, a silence is all around even when voices speak..You expressed it just as it is..right from those shallow ponds of evenings trying to capture that offspring of a Dream.Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Naseer. Yelena M.

Ay, this meaningless poem seems will follow you like dogs through forests of silence...!

A meaningless poem full of wisdom has so much meaning. Thank you for sharing your talent with another great poem Naseer :)

Sometimes meaningless means everything! Perfect!

you took all the liberty iin writing this one.....so you called this one meaningless...the things that comes straight from heart can never be meaningless like this one...brilliant...10

The title sounds ok but your poem were great.

the MEANINGLESS POEMS with full of meaning... brilliant write....10++

the only meaningless is the title but the contents are full of meaning..ths s good..

i find that you 'meaningless poem' is quite meaningful. fine piece..

Your last lines are especially memorable. Brief, but far from meaningless. A pleasure to read you once again. Best regards, Sandra