Walking home from the job I keep,
In this downtown city we call civilized,
I feel as if I’m the only one with eyes,
Unobstructed so to see the truth of matters.
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Yes, that´s true. Lovely poem. Violence and disrespect are rulers in the kingdom of the ' me '.
a lovely write that was...it should always be a 'me' world...your 'me' seems to have grown or extended out..your compassionate heart was able to hand out love...the 'growth of the me'
Again, I am impressed by the writing and the presentation of this story. It is much more than that, and it should be. The clarity of this piece makes it worth reading at any level of human discussion of society's ills. Again, just wonderful! GW62
So much can be found within your words Britney, very well penned
One focused eye on the seldom seen. Poignant evocations, Britney
I liked this poem and the theme. A great poem i think. The rhythem is quite nice too. a great work
Whoa! nice peom baby girl.. wish l could upload my own peom also. But very soon l will do that. I really like how you link the words and the total combination........... keep it up.
i liked the social activist in you...keep going, young lady!
a me world the world that has taken over the real world the world of our ancients where a person was a perso through other people.....humanity(ubuntu) .. does not ring anymore to other peoples minds......a great piece is this. thank you