Friday, March 27, 2009

A 'Me' World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking home from the job I keep,
In this downtown city we call civilized,
I feel as if I’m the only one with eyes,
Unobstructed so to see the truth of matters.
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Britney Hogue
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Lindo Mvelase 17 September 2009

a me world the world that has taken over the real world the world of our ancients where a person was a perso through other people.....humanity(ubuntu) .. does not ring anymore to other peoples minds......a great piece is this. thank you

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Obed Souza 16 July 2009

Yes, that´s true. Lovely poem. Violence and disrespect are rulers in the kingdom of the ' me '.

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a lovely write that was...it should always be a 'me' world...your 'me' seems to have grown or extended out..your compassionate heart was able to hand out love...the 'growth of the me'

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 April 2009

Again, I am impressed by the writing and the presentation of this story. It is much more than that, and it should be. The clarity of this piece makes it worth reading at any level of human discussion of society's ills. Again, just wonderful! GW62

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~ Jon London ~ 10 April 2009

So much can be found within your words Britney, very well penned

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Pablo Cruise 06 April 2009

One focused eye on the seldom seen. Poignant evocations, Britney

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Shekhar Joshi 03 April 2009

I liked this poem and the theme. A great poem i think. The rhythem is quite nice too. a great work

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Fasanmi Femi 31 March 2009

Whoa! nice peom baby girl.. wish l could upload my own peom also. But very soon l will do that. I really like how you link the words and the total combination........... keep it up.

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Indira Babbellapati 27 March 2009

i liked the social activist in you...keep going, young lady!

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