A Maze Of Living Comments

Very beautiful poem. Good idea and work. I like it very much. DA

Wonderful poem. I love your imagery/metaphor: 10++ 'Because we are only pawns on the chessboard of Him...'

beautiful amazing penned.. thank you dear maria.. hazem al..

Your poem reminded me of a famous saying of Christ.......... Oh who beareth earthly load come and bears my yoke............It's easy to bear...... This stanzas are pregnant with great spiritual wisdom......... Nothing is happening for no reason, so let us learn not to make the same mistakes and let us ask God and the man to forgive guilts for us for the sake of the Great Mercy. Because we are only pawns on the chessboard of Him... He is the Puppeteer and we are the puppets.......And he controls us by the threads of fate..............When we are ready to bear our crosses and ready to follow him, we are ready for salvation............ Good Write......10+++

I like this one, its has vivid imagery.