Thursday, April 22, 2010

A Matter Of Time, Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beauty destroys
Passion gets what it deserves
Wealth damages
After certain ages
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Luwi Habte
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Marieta Maglas 03 February 2011

great poem..... this style you used for writing the poem is a great one...thank you for sharing...Mari

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Eyan Desir 27 April 2010

Interesting write..........Luwi Thanks 4 telling us

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Samson Ii 25 April 2010

It is a pointing coherence, grammar, denotation and essence. Gob-well Done Luwi.

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Aastha Uppal 25 April 2010

the title only says a lot A MATTER OF TIME.. but this poem says more than just that.. it tells you how we know that everything will pass with time.. we know it still we don't know it.... the flow of poem tells you that everything is momentary and then as you go further the surity sounds like a delimma and then finally it all ends up as a question which is answered yet unanswerable... its a matter of time... wow.. what a poem! ! truly like it

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Lynn Glover 24 April 2010

Its just a matter of time, you become a better poet with each write. I enjoyed it. Lynn

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Max Saysoff 24 April 2010

enjoys the meaning of this poem i believe if something is coming it is 'only a matter of time' (I'm in the proses of waiting) over all i like it and it is vary good =)

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Iron Panda 23™ 24 April 2010

'Time can matter a lot It changes cold for hot' koolnesss (: another great write! !

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Claire Hunter 23 April 2010

i loved it 'Beauty destroys Passion gets what it deserves Wealth damages After certain ages' gave me chills

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Simon Tewolde 22 April 2010

ohhhhh Love this 'Time can matter a lot It changes cold for hot It can lose what you have got Over there, picture can be done through a dot' very deep! ! you took me down by surprise.

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