A nice poem.
It would have been a nicer one, with less details and less number of lines. To me, those seemed a little too many, and the poem unnecessarily prolonged!
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A nice poem. It would have been a nicer one, with less details and less number of lines. To me, those seemed a little too many, and the poem unnecessarily prolonged!
Thank you for the compliment and insights, Khairul.