A Mathematical Relationship Comments

Very brilliant, using mathematical variables to quantify and qualify a romantic relationship is poetically very remarkable. It's a lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

May the intensity of our love be inversely proportional to every wave that falls in the Niagara. If intensity of love varies inversely according to waves, the product of intensity and wave will remain constant, i.e., if the waves will be on lower side the love will be on higher side. If so poet means the waves that affect love and friendship should decrease so that love may increase. A nice idea, i liked it.

love mathematically expressed is well written and beautiful with a universal appeal...

It doesnt really sound like a poem because of 0% rhyme scheme. Just a friendly hint: It would look better if you changed the format on this sight...you dont have to change what you wrote, just hit enter more often and it would look more orderly. The first two paragraphs go along nicely with the name and idea, but the last two arent very good. The references in them are so off the wall and its hard to understand why they are there. If it was longer with more paragraphs like the first two, and had at least a semblance of the rhyme scheme, it would be much better. On the positive side, it is a good idea and has appeal for its unique (mathematical) view.

Very very interesting to read. Keep it up

Loved your use of mathematics in this poem. Life revolves around equations and formulas in math, you expressed it well in this poem. I've written several poems using properties of math, if you'd like you may read and comment on them. I'd be interested in your thoughts of them. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Congratulations Suraj..Beautiful poem on Mathematics..Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

Great poem! Well done!

congrats on having this poem chosen as the Poem of the day!

Quite an interesting poem, well done...quite well measured, I must say, even the proportions of intensity of love vs waves of Niagara...

Hey, i can see the mathematics in you, the angles you used in the construction of words is clear, weldone. If u don't mine take a few minute of ur time and bisect my angle of poems(festus, the fluke, faith ect...) for me.

very very interesting... amazing presentation!

Fantastic idea of calculating abstract. Yes, mathematics can't reach the extreme, but it could put a valid proximity of attending what we should know by conscious....Nice experience of reading.

Beautifully expressed in a very different way. Loved it.

Love and Maths do not always go together, but you have put it all so beautifully in a poem. Well done! Keep it up!

i 'doubled' over in delight when i read this poem.. :) tom

Hey, You are still studying, huh? College? Specialization? Math? Science? Anyways, you got all your equations and relations figured out. Very imaginative. Keep it up! Cheers. Subroto.

i really like the away you organise your peomwith mathematic words God will renew your strenght in writing, you will get to your destination.in life

Suraj, What a delightfully unique paean to love. Perhaps everything in the universe can, indeed, be expalined mathematically. You have convinced me. Regards, Don

Beautiful, almost makes me actually appreciate math! LW