As I walked home
with you tonight
Just like my heart
The moon was bright.
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Lucky lady :) Again, a beautifully written poem with vivid images that make the knees weak. Well done my friend. Thank you.
easy flow, clear line of thought, and happy...beautiful.
Short sweet and really nice. The flow was excellent and the emotion of happiness was abundant. It has always amazed me how in so few words a picture can be volumes. Like Haiku's which I enjoy a lot. Few words but if written right wonderful.Great job
Hi Tia. You cant beat the short ones direct and to the point yet saying so much, Really well done **10** Regards Dave T.
Uneque poem Tia.