Tuesday, October 10, 2006

A Masquerade Comments

Rating: 4.5

Do any of us truly wear our own face
Whether we are indoors among those closest to us
Or in or out among those we think we know
And out among those we definately do not
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Raul Castelan 07 June 2007

Yes, that is how life is. There is no telling who is telling the truth and who is not. I love this one. I have written poetry that deals with this too, but yours really caught the real insight to how life is a masquerade. So, I shall keep on reading more of your work.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 10 October 2006

ahhh, The truth be told here, Marilyn...Genuinity is a rare find today...A Fine Penning, indeed''''''''''''FJR

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Asma Bahrainwala 10 October 2006

this 1 has an echo from Eliot's The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock.. 'to prepare a face to meet other faces'... nice write... regards... asma...

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Scarlett Treat 10 October 2006

I have long thought that we DO wear masks, sometimes even hiding from ourselves. Maybe our honesty comes out in our writing - at least, I hope so! Good write, Marilyn.

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