A Mason's Daughter And A Carpenter's Son Comments

Your poem expresses the challenges of change very prettily. Your cottage is alive with dreams and the new factory must never overwhelm that which has been built before the cranes and truckloads of building materials disturb the peaceful scene. A nostalgic poem, rich with allegory. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I am always fascinated by the way you personalize skies and rivers. May the old ferryman never lose his wisdom. Warm regards, Sandra