Saturday, November 24, 2007

A Martyr’s Point Of View Comments

Rating: 4.3

From a martyr’s point of view,
I’ve messed up things countless times.
Some you’ve noticed, some you haven’t.
But what keeps me in awe,
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Eli MorenoDrew
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Dorothy- A. Holmes 05 December 2007

Eli, I think this is a lovely poem, soft and gentle and spoken in whispers. 10! Dorothy

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Jolenish Fiber 24 November 2007

very good. form could use some work, but I like the point that you rey to get across.

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