Sunday, September 16, 2007

A Marriage Plea Comments

Rating: 5.0

Remember me
On bended knee
And lonely, too,
In an autumn park
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Uriah Hamilton
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Sandra Fowler 20 September 2007

Haunting in its intensity. Good-bye is one of the saddest words in the English language. But no one has the power to take your memories from you. They belong to you forever. Beautiful write, Uriah. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 16 September 2007

Uriah, you have such poetic skill. This one flows beautifully without unnecessary words. It is honest and melancholic with perfectly placed irony in the final stanza. love, Allie xxxx

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